Um... This is from back in August or so.

Same as the last one I posted, I am unconvinced about its quality.

I would like to know what I need to improve in my writing in general--I will be posting further stories I've already written and making a concerted effort to write more new ones if I can.

I guess I have a liking for the name "Kowalski". A Kowalski was the main character in both of the stories I have posted, and back a few years ago I made a series of movies on the game "The Movies" called "The Kowalski Files"... so... yeah.